I was not able to upload my first elevator pitch because I got the date that it was due messed up, therefore I did not have any feedback to reflect upon.
Hey A.J. Your delivery was spot on and your pitch went very well. From experience, my first pitch didn't even compare to my next attempt, so I would encourage you to keep doing it. I love the idea and it's absolutely something that anyone can benefit from and enjoy.
A.J, This is a great idea. I wasn't aware that such technology was available, but I would definitely use an app like this. The pitch seemed to go pretty well, I think it will get better with practice, so keep up the good work!
Hi A.J. I think this idea is brilliant although the challenge is going to be the technology to recognize similar items. Computers have a hard time comparing items in the same way we compare items. There is a lot of reason I'm sure why your girlfriend like that shirt and in some ways I do not think the technology is ready for this amazing Idea. Your pitch was great although you may want to introduce your self before you begin!
Hello A.J! I really like your idea. And your elevator pitch was really good, and this was only your first pitch. The only piece of constructive criticism I can give is not to use filler words such as "like" and "um". Overall it was good, you delivered it nicely. I wish you the best in your future endeavors! http://nehalava.blogspot.com/
Hey A.J. Your delivery was spot on and your pitch went very well. From experience, my first pitch didn't even compare to my next attempt, so I would encourage you to keep doing it. I love the idea and it's absolutely something that anyone can benefit from and enjoy.
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ReplyDeleteThis is a great idea. I wasn't aware that such technology was available, but I would definitely use an app like this. The pitch seemed to go pretty well, I think it will get better with practice, so keep up the good work!
Hi A.J.
ReplyDeleteI think this idea is brilliant although the challenge is going to be the technology to recognize similar items. Computers have a hard time comparing items in the same way we compare items. There is a lot of reason I'm sure why your girlfriend like that shirt and in some ways I do not think the technology is ready for this amazing Idea. Your pitch was great although you may want to introduce your self before you begin!
Hello A.J!
ReplyDeleteI really like your idea. And your elevator pitch was really good, and this was only your first pitch. The only piece of constructive criticism I can give is not to use filler words such as "like" and "um". Overall it was good, you delivered it nicely.
I wish you the best in your future endeavors!
http://nehalava.blogspot.com/